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Therian by ~invaderzatyr77:iconinvaderzatyr77:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Open




This phantom tail i cannot see
This misplaced soul inside of me
I walk on all fours
Yet i do not have paws

I wish i could fly away
But in this place i must stay
Sometimes i wish i could growl
Or at least bark,yip or howl

Do not give me the boot
because im an animal in a human suit
Just because you dont understand
This is not something that i planned

Please dont cage me
Put me in a straitjacket
Or in a soft white room
Maybe if you set your mind free,
Your inner therian might bloom
©2007-2009 ~invaderzatyr77
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Author's Comments

this is a poem that i wrote in class....

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~Lady-Dragoness11 Sep 26, 2007, 9:53:13 AM
wow, thats amazing! im rlly bad at poetry

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Do not meddle in the affairs of Dragons, as you are crunchy and good with ketchup.
:iconinvaderzatyr77:
~invaderzatyr77 Sep 26, 2007, 10:15:18 AM
thanks :D

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singing is your soul breathin...... so give it some air
Im NoT CrAzY jUsT aSk My ToAsTeR!
see my old site-[link]
then see my new one-[link]
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~Lady-Dragoness11 Sep 26, 2007, 10:23:15 AM
^.=.^

btw, wat does it mean by "Advanced Critique Encouraged"?

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Do not meddle in the affairs of Dragons, as you are crunchy and good with ketchup.
:iconinvaderzatyr77:
~invaderzatyr77 Sep 26, 2007, 10:33:59 AM
dunno... i just think it sounds cool :D

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singing is your soul breathin...... so give it some air
Im NoT CrAzY jUsT aSk My ToAsTeR!
see my old site-[link]
then see my new one-[link]
:iconlady-dragoness11:
~Lady-Dragoness11 Sep 26, 2007, 11:05:45 AM
lol

doesnt critique mean critisism? if so, that means "please dis my work". uh oh...

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Do not meddle in the affairs of Dragons, as you are crunchy and good with ketchup.
:iconinvaderzatyr77:
~invaderzatyr77 Sep 26, 2007, 11:07:56 AM
..... :shrug:

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singing is your soul breathin...... so give it some air
Im NoT CrAzY jUsT aSk My ToAsTeR!
see my old site-[link]
then see my new one-[link]
:iconlady-dragoness11:
~Lady-Dragoness11 Sep 26, 2007, 11:08:29 AM
lol

lets hope not!

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Do not meddle in the affairs of Dragons, as you are crunchy and good with ketchup.
:iconinvaderzatyr77:
~invaderzatyr77 Sep 26, 2007, 11:10:55 AM
i dont think so..... one min.... i'll search it on google :D

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singing is your soul breathin...... so give it some air
Im NoT CrAzY jUsT aSk My ToAsTeR!
see my old site-[link]
then see my new one-[link]
:iconinvaderzatyr77:
~invaderzatyr77 Sep 26, 2007, 11:12:00 AM
it means smart comments wanted lol!!!

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singing is your soul breathin...... so give it some air
Im NoT CrAzY jUsT aSk My ToAsTeR!
see my old site-[link]
then see my new one-[link]
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